Thursday, October 11, 2012

Intro 1: Contrast Essay

She's smart, educated, married and also happens to be my arch nemesis. How does Megan earn this title? Well she earned this title by being overly involved in my life. She has graduated school, I still attend. She is married, I am not. She has a three year old and another baby on the way, I haven't made plans for children yet. What makes Megan so awful? That she assumes that she must be better than everyone, because she seems to have it all.

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  1. "What makes Megan so awful? That she assumes that she must be better than everyone, because she seems to have it all."

    I'd put this ahead of the plan of development and, in fact, run with it a little in graf 1, unpack and explain it a little, give an example.

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  2. Okay, on the rewrites, do I just post them as a comment, or a whole new post? Also, on my classification essay you mentioned rewriting, but I am at a loss on how to work with the topic I already have.

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  3. Graf 2 of the contrast essay, I don't understand what the assignment is there.

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