Graf 17: Reaction to Comments

Details, details and more details. That seems to be the key. Also, what attracts the reader? Trying to hook in a reader is quite a task. Do they relate to the topic? Well it seems as though whether or not your subject appeals to them, it's the meat of the paper, the point, that attracts the reader. Regardless of the subject, if the meat is good, they can relate. :)