No one imagines being the one to tell their best friend that
their dad was just shot in the head, but on that Tuesday, three days before
Christmas, I was doing just that. How on earth was I the one doing such a
thing, well that’s a little beyond me. I signed up for late night movies,
laughing fits, and sharing brownies, not “I’m sorry your dad probably isn’t
going to make it.” So right there outside A.C. Moore, in the parking lot was
where I told my best friend that her dad had been shot in the head.
So, you're going to explain why--three separate reasons--that you were the one? That can work but make sure it doesn't turn into a process essay. Don't tell us how--tell us why. There's a difference.
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